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songwriting...

Wednesday May 07, 2008 at 03:04 PM

When I was getting my Commercial Music degree, an instructer there looked at me and said "I bet you're a songwriter. You look like a songwriter." It's always confused me, cause I've never written a decent song in my life. I still wonder if it was something about my ratty pink chuck taylors, cause all great songwriters wear chucks, or at least they should.

But anyway. There are people in this town who know a lot about music and making great songs, and they are all telling me I need to create something original and stop singing that Such Great Heights cover already.

So I'm trying my hand at songwriting here... This is just a dorky little song I've been working on. It's funny, cause there are lines I absolutely love and lines I absolutely hate... but the song's kind of got a life of it's own at the moment. So right now it's something really simple and cheezey, but you've got to start somewhere, right?  Recording a raw track, look out for it in the next few days. Think Ben Folds. Any feedback would be *wonderful*, as I don't really know what I'm doing.

 

Storm clouds gathered while you were gone
I haven't seen sunshine in ten days since you went away
Where have you been my lover, my friend?
And here comes the rain again...
 
Blue skies have gone, I'm so tired of gray
All this mud, all these puddles, I keep sinking and drowning
And trying to smile, but I forgot how to
I'm always thinking of you...
 
So won't you come save me
Come shine your light on me
Chase all this trouble and darkness away
And I promise I'll love you this time like I should
And I won't bring the rain clouds today
 
I don't know how else to say that I love you
I'm drenched and I'm miserable
singing in the rain
And I don't know how else to say that I'm sorry
I've suffered, I'm broken
I've learned this damn lesson
So come on baby and bring back the sun
And I won't bring the rain clouds today
No I won't bring the rain clouds today

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